Little did these men know that these shape shifting demonic women would soon grow tired of them. Once the men were of no use or annoying to the women they were as good as dead because the women would imprison them and eat them, ALIVE!
One fateful and stormy morning the women deployed their monkeys to search for new men since they were growing bored with their current ones. Being good little monkeys that they were they were able to find a ship full of sailors who looked like prime eating. The skilled monkeys caused the ship to wreck and informed the women of the wreck. Once on land the men were greeted by these beautiful demonic women who lured them back to their city with promises of riches, food, shelter, and lots of babies.
Arriving in the city the men saw an affluent and booming city that had been completely created by the women with shape shifting skills. The men married the women and they lived happily ever after.
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But they did not.
The women knew that they still had their former husbands imprisoned and that they needed to eat them so one night they got together and did so. One of the husband's woke up while his wife was out with the others. To this day it's not sure why he awoke, though it's believed that the cat jumped on him and woke him up. The faithful husband realized that his wife was not there but heard her come through the door and pretended to be asleep. As he lay there he couldn't help but notice that she had a human head in her hands and that she was EATING the brains like spaghetti. She then returned to bed.
The next day the man approached his men and told them of the ordeal. Naturally not all of them believed him but there were those who did. The men who did helped plot an escape.
One night at dusk the men got together and did a chant to summon a fairy and her magical horse. The chant was successful and the magical fairy horse appeared for the men to jump on and escape. All of the believers were able to fit on this horse and they flew off to return home. The non believers however, were not so fortunate for they were eaten that night by their lovely wives.
Authors Note:
The story has been altered from Twenty Jataka Tales and The Goblin Town
Bibliography. "The Goblin Town" from Twenty Jatake Tales by Noor Inayat (Khan). Web source.
Hi Neko!
ReplyDeleteI really like the extra details you added to the original story. It makes the story more interesting. It sounds like a twisted fairy tale. How the shapeshifters love there pets and city even though they are evil demons. The vivid imagery was great, especially the spaghetti brains. I found it very entertaining.
Hi Neko, this is a great retelling of the story because you added in more details to explain how the women get the ships of men. I think you do a great job in preserving the main plot in your retelling and I think you do a great job of showing the terror the husband must have felt when he saw his wife eating another human.
ReplyDeleteNeko, your details and imagery really made me feel like I was in the story! When you were describing the woman eating the brains, I physically cringed! I enjoyed how you described the monkey's role in the whole process of capturing the men. This story had already caught my eye (I did my retelling with it as well) but, I liked how you changed it!
ReplyDeleteHey Neko!
ReplyDeleteWow, you did a great job with that imagery. I like the phrases “fateful and stormy morning” and “eating the brains like spaghetti.” That last one, especially, really made me picture that scene [and gag a little].
I do wonder, why didn’t the demonic wives eat their former husbands before luring new ones in? I know the story said they were tired of them, wouldn’t they then eat them? Or do they like the idea of how close they are to being caught, and like that thrill of excitement of possibly being found in mischief? Did they forget about their old husbands because they were imprisoned somewhere or do they like drawing out that whole torturous process?
What if you elaborated on what happened to the husbands that refused to believe and were left behind with the cannibalistic wives? I feel like expanding that part of the story might draw out the horror/gore part of your story.
Hi Neko!
ReplyDeleteI loved reading your story! You did a good job retelling this story and including details. I could picture the wife coming in and eating the brain like it was spaghetti. To be honest, that part made me cringe. I would be terrified just like the husband if I saw that. Overall, I like the way you retold this story and it was fun to read!